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Posted 25 Jan 2015never be mine is pretty sorted sounds good the second song dont quite have the same impact the vocal style is better on the 1st but then i aint no expert when it comes to rap/hip hop style songs for want of a better word. i think you will crack it you do have a talent for this stuff.
Posted 19 Jan 2015Hey man cool tracks. Never be mine has 'stickability' factor about it, it sticks in your head which obviously is the prerequisite of a good pop track. And I like it's simplicity of production, draws a lot of emphasis on the vocal/rap.
Now the other one "When I Stop Coming Home To Ya" should without doubt be titled "what you gonna do". And its missing one key ingredient which would make it really hooky...a vocal singing the melody an octave above on the "Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh" the rest "what you gonna do", left as you have it (solo). That way you draw huge emphasis on the hook "what you gonna do".
The second vocal would even work better if it was female so it had even more distinction, but thats not really that important. But you definitely need that octave. Try singing it now in falsetto and you'll see what I mean. Just a simple change like that will make a world of difference and will make the hook stick to your brain like supaglue. Dig it! />
Hi there. It's funny that you say that because if you listen really closely I did put a falsetto exactly where you want it to be. I just left it really faint. I'll go back in and try it higher though and see what happens. Thanks!
Posted 18 Jan 2015Hello ShamrockCrew,
Spinning the first tune.
I like it man. I think you're a pretty good rapper and I like the EDM beat (I guess that's what they call it). I gotta put one of these on my bucket list (as soon as cross a heavy metal song off the list).
Second spin of first tune...
Yeah, I'm digging it.
Second song- first spin.
I think I like the first tune much better but this can compliment the other tune on an album (like showing a little diversity).
HMMMMM both seems to be a little short but perhaps that's the way this genre works.
Song went back the first one.
Head bouncing again... Petty cool %#%^$$&^#^&* man.
Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoy it :-)
Posted 7 Jan 2015Never be simple -
Musically - kewl.
Kinda funny first verse... I'm not one for the cursing.. but I know its the genre.
As all your songs - musically fun.
Must be a song snippet - ended after a minute?
Thanks. I figured since I haven't been here in awhile I would just give to samples to get feedback on them and see what people think overall of where I'm at now. That and I didn't want to do two posts back to back for each song or one post with two songs since I don't think we can do that anyway. I'm glad you like them :-)
Posted 6 Jan 2015I like it. It's a fun song. I wish I could hear this finished up. I agree that talking about why she's a hot mess would make this even more fun to listen to. Good job on everything :-)
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