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  1. In Topic: We Should Be In Love

    Posted 10 Apr 2013

    View PostJason Kalman, on 09 April 2013 - 06:25 PM, said:

    View PostTheShamrockCrew, on 09 April 2013 - 06:21 PM, said:

    AdamAsh: Thanks! I try to make everything as catchy as possible so I'm glad you dig it and you think it's easy to remember :-)

    Jason Kalman: Taylor does from what I know but hopefully she hears this one (somehow) and changes her ways lol. As for the producer, yeah I mean we got it copy-written, we have plenty of proof that everything is ours too, but yeah... His logic behind it is that he wants the song to be totally unknown while he pitches it and THEN put it on our websites. I don't understand that at all but I have to respect him lol. Personally, I would rather start showing off our work now because, who knows who could be listening out there? But whatever. Let's see how his pitches go I guess.

    I think you'll have luck. There are tons of female teenage singers trying to make it and this could be their first hit and then sit back and watch the Taylor Swift agents will come calling you.
    Jay

    That would be a welcomed change.

  2. In Topic: We Should Be In Love

    Posted 9 Apr 2013

    AdamAsh: Thanks! I try to make everything as catchy as possible so I'm glad you dig it and you think it's easy to remember :-)

    Jason Kalman: Taylor does from what I know but hopefully she hears this one (somehow) and changes her ways lol. As for the producer, yeah I mean we got it copy-written, we have plenty of proof that everything is ours too, but yeah... His logic behind it is that he wants the song to be totally unknown while he pitches it and THEN put it on our websites. I don't understand that at all but I have to respect him lol. Personally, I would rather start showing off our work now because, who knows who could be listening out there? But whatever. Let's see how his pitches go I guess.

  3. In Topic: We Should Be In Love

    Posted 9 Apr 2013

    View Postjgarcia658, on 09 April 2013 - 02:27 PM, said:

    My suggestions:

    Ac guitar only is fine in the intro: Nah,nah, nah vocals not needed.


    I still don't like the trailing echos that you do when you repeat the words again.

    At 2:09 it sounds better, with the guitar, but the tone is a bit lacking. I would also replace the vocals with keyboard and have a conversation between the guitar and the keyboard.

    I enjoy your music!



    Thanks! It was worth a shot lol.

  4. In Topic: We Should Be In Love

    Posted 9 Apr 2013

    View Postjgarcia658, on 08 April 2013 - 10:50 PM, said:

    I truly loved this one. My only suggestion is to get rid the repeating vocal or the guy that pretends to be an echo. I feel it is not needed and gives the song an amateurish quality which is obviously unfair since the tune is quite good.

    I did not dig the break at 2:09. Perhaps a simple piano part doing what you did with the vocals.

    HAHAHAHA All the vocals are me! And check out the song again, I uploaded the final demo which is a taaaad different :-) Maybe you will like it more, we shall see.

  5. In Topic: Never Let Me Go

    Posted 9 Apr 2013

    View PostCapM, on 08 April 2013 - 07:03 PM, said:

    I dug this one! A little more smooth beat than the rapid thumping bass, but I like both. My only real crit is the electric guitar. The vibrato the guitarist was playing was technically weak and instead of vibrato made it sound very pitchy. Other than the electric guitar, everything else sounded very professional. Best of luck to you with the new producer! Good job.

    I dunno about the guitar stuff, I don't what it's exactly supposed to sound like, but hopefully you will enjoy his guitar playing in the other song. And thanks! I hope this goes well too :-)

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    10 Mar 2013 - 02:40
    Hey I listened to your demo, "Hot Mess" and I think it's really good. A surefire hit if you sell it to a boy band or something like that. All the best!
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