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  1. Another Guy

    Posted 22 Jul 2013

    Sorry to do my minimum of 2 crits before posting but this is my first full lyric in a while, I'm a bit eager to post, here we are

    Another Guy

    Your fickle mind is a puzzle
    But I have no one to blame but myself
    I've kept my flesh locked up, chained and muzzled
    Now my eyes are free of the filth
    And I don't know what to do with you
    I'll just leave you where you lie
    Look at me not with those wistful eyes
    Let me be just another guy
    Trust me it's simpler this way
    Another victim in your conquest
    But let a fire remain in your eyes
    And I will respond, oh I will confess
    That I don't know what to do with you
    I'll just leave you where you lie
    Look at me not with those wistful eyes
    Let me be just another guy
    Have your fun while it's here
    And I will have my silent despair
    Look over my head in its musings
    While I spend my daylight proving
    That I don't know what to do with you
    I'll just leave you where you lie
    Look at me not with those wistful eyes
    Let me be just another guy

    Hoping for your best critiques
  2. Writer's Block

    Posted 19 Jul 2013

    We all know this I'm sure, and we've all had our struggles with it as well, but I really want to discuss how it comes upon us and ways we've personally got over it. I know this is my first post on here in a while, that's because I've had a good year and a half of writer's block. Don't get me wrong, I've been writing lyrics, but nothing real, nothing I'd want to show you folks on here.

    For me it started after a big change in my life, which you figure would offer new ideas for lyrics, but no. When I moved away from my beloved home town in central Florida. I went to a new school, an arts performance school, full of people who had accomplished big things in music at their young age, somewhat undermining me. I mean they were beautiful singers and guitarists and when it came my turn to display my skills, I choked every time. Just embarrassing. So this gradual depletion of my confidence led me to stop writing, even when I wanted to, I simply couldn't find the right ideas. I'm slowly getting over it. I still haven't written anything legitimate, but I think I'm getting there.

    So share your experiences with any sort of lull in your writing abilities and how you got around it, as for rapport.

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17 years old
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    Mortal_Soul Icon

    22 Feb 2011 - 23:18
    Thanks for the twin crits, earlier, btw. I'm eternally grateful. Been workin' on a few new songs, lately, and envisioning a complex instrumental piece I'm calling "Journey Through Hell". The lyric ones are "In the Absence of Light" and "I Want You to Believe"
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    Mortal_Soul Icon

    22 Feb 2011 - 23:14
    Yo, dude...what's new? No, nothin' much in the JOP world is goin' on. Matt told me if Jon goes back inta the studio this year he'd prob'ly join him, but it seems there's some friction in that camp right now. All I meant was that I was gonna blow the lid off'a the rock/metal scene with my whole Goth/ambient metal Mortal Soul gimmick. And I will, too. One day. LOL
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    R-N-R Jim Icon

    18 Jan 2011 - 23:05
    Then I must be the walrus.
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    Harreh Icon

    11 Dec 2010 - 22:57
    thanks for the friendship dude!
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    stewart alexander Icon

    09 Dec 2010 - 22:10
    good to have you as a chum :) just catching up on your lyrics mate..
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    The Eggmen Icon

    07 Dec 2010 - 21:58
    Call me the walrus. goo goo g'joob, lol
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    Sammy Harry Icon

    30 Nov 2010 - 21:06
    Hey Eggmen! Are you by any chance a Beatles fan?
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    Mortal_Soul Icon

    27 Nov 2010 - 00:06
    Just now saw your Thxgvg comment on my profile. It was good, thanks. Coupla tuna sandwiches always hits the spot for me. LOL Btw, I just noticed your name isn't Cliff. Oops! Don't be like me an' wait til you're an old guy before doin' somethin' with your music. Get out there an' do somethin' with it!
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