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#1 Theresa

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Posted 03 May 2012 - 08:43 PM

Connected

I see a star twinkle
in the jet black winter sky
it reminds me we're connected
You and I

Streaking through the universe
In many shapes and forms
We are cosmic dust
Created to be born

Patterns by billions
yet some how the same
Staring out, riding through
Wondering how we came

visit my cd baby site visit my sonic bids site
http://www.soundclick.com/theresaloder

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#2 Simple Simon

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Posted 05 May 2012 - 12:48 AM

"Patterns by billions" - Oh yes indeed!

Lovely.

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#3 DannyDep

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Posted 05 May 2012 - 05:35 PM

Very lovely indeed Theresa.
Reminded me of the movie Contact.
Carl Sagan would be proud of you.

My most spiritual encounter happened under a jet black winter sky as well.
(so what are we doing down here in Florida?) :blink:

"The quality of life,
can only be measured by
the integrity of yourself and the friends
that take the trip with you."
Here are two of my friends,
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here is my Soundclick page,
Soundclick webpage
here is my Facebook page,
Facebook webpate
and here is the rest.
My homepage.

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#4 oxe57

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Posted 06 May 2012 - 05:07 PM

Good stuff here especially:

'cosmic dust created to be born'

"don't criticize the recipie, only critcize the dish"

Music with meaning at: http://www.soundclick.com/solide

Lyrics, poetry, screenplays etc. at: http://www.storymani...o...nsR&alpha=E