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WARISTAN Alternative Rock

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Posted 22 March 2012 - 12:18 AM

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Brand-new song, as always would love to hear what you think! And I promise to return the favor! You guys rock!
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WARISTAN

Music/words/performance/production: Jason Kalman
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I’m on my way to Waristan

I’m on my way to sunny Waristan
To a resort where you can be the man
I hear it’s sunny and the people nice
A package deal so cheap I named my price

Whoa hold up, hold up, are those gun shots?
Hey no joke, I want my money back

Chorus
I got shot in the streets of Waristan
I didn’t get very far in Waristan
I thought I’d find true love in Waristan
I thought I’d buy beachfront in Waristan

Ok, so things didn’t quite work out as planned
Not really, no not at all
Luckily it was just a flesh wound
No running water and no roof at this hotel
I’m getting outta here right now or raising HELL!!!!

Oh wait no not again
GET ME OUTTA HERE!!!!!….

Chorus
I got shot in the streets of Waristan
I didn’t get very far in Waristan
I thought I’d find true love in Waristan
I thought I’d buy beachfront in Waristan

Solo

I guess the trip wasn’t that bad after all
You know, looking back
I learned a few things about myself
I found out I can run real fast after getting shot….

Chorus
I got shot in the streets of Waristan
I didn’t get very far in Waristan
I thought I’d find true love in Waristan
I thought I’d buy beachfront in Waristan

Whew, I made it out alive B)
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Posted 22 March 2012 - 07:31 AM

I thought this was really cool n very well done Jason..Its like The Dead Kennedys meeting The Pixies while jamming out with Van Halen n 70s Jazz funk like Gil Scott Heron or something..Its abit bizarre n eccentric - n i dig its playful spirit.... love the really dark humour - and the totally unexpected talking bits adding to the absurd,chilling irony..
Verse is supa-funky and the chorus is catchy n memorable..
Has alot of personality n character conceptually as a track -and i actually really like the fact its all a little rough-round-the edges,abit loose n not supa-polished or anything
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Posted 22 March 2012 - 06:58 PM

View PostScenesFromPalacio, on 22 March 2012 - 07:31 AM, said:

I thought this was really cool n very well done Jason..Its like The Dead Kennedys meeting The Pixies while jamming out with Van Halen n 70s Jazz funk like Gil Scott Heron or something..Its abit bizarre n eccentric - n i dig its playful spirit.... love the really dark humour - and the totally unexpected talking bits adding to the absurd,chilling irony..
Verse is supa-funky and the chorus is catchy n memorable..
Has alot of personality n character conceptually as a track -and i actually really like the fact its all a little rough-round-the edges,abit loose n not supa-polished or anything
Nice one
Thanx for the inspiration

Thanks Steve, the kind words mean alot! I did go back and tighten the performance a bit. It was too loose in places. I think it is better now, still loose, but not too loose.
I love all the bands you mention. Funny, I never set out to write a particular sounding song. I did set out to write a rock tune, but that was my only plan. I never really know what i'll end up with, but that is what makes the creative process so fun and exciting.
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Posted 23 March 2012 - 06:01 AM

This song is Very Cool, Jason! Love everything about it! And WARISTAN is an amazing word, one worth trademarking - I think.

... B)

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Posted 23 March 2012 - 09:34 AM

Hey there Jason..............now this is diffrent!! Love the versatility in your persuit to mix things up. It's not a song in the traditional sence of the word....the art of sound and imigary.........very cool!
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Posted 23 March 2012 - 07:36 PM

Love this!!
When I saw Gil Scott Heron mentioned in the first post I knew I had to listen to this and I was not disappointed. This grabbed me right from the start. Great energy and humor. Love your vocal and really digging the guitar. This left me with a big smile.
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Posted 23 March 2012 - 10:23 PM

I'm not a fan of 'humor' music but this was smokin'! Love the lead guitarist work! Very well done.

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Posted 25 March 2012 - 10:00 AM

Hi Jason,

This is soooo different I have to love it. I always appreciate a unique song/lyric and this is definitely unique. I have one small lyrical suggestion if you're going to record this again.

I’m on my way to sunny Waristan
To a resort where you I can be the man

I also like the talking part. This is so far out of my genre but I really like it!!! :)

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Posted 25 March 2012 - 10:47 AM

Jason,

I won't be penning an in depth review of this. Not that it doesn't deserve it. It absolutely does. In the very best sense. But, I am going through some personal medical issues right now, and I have discovered they are affecting my attitude towards things... a thing you and others here do not deserve.

Anyways, I listened to this little gem the other day. Hearing a new tune from you once gain reminded me of the aspects of being a member here that I personally value the most. Namely; interacting with some very very talented, charming folks.

This song strikes me, beyond it's excellent musicianship, as a highly creative effort. I often feel the best songs/movies/books etc., are produced when the subject is something completely off the beaten path... something you'd expect the least, and are therefore moved by to the greatest degree. This song has that quality.

Waristan....who woulda thunk?

Execution: 8.5 of 10.
Musicianship: 9 of 10
Originality: 11 of 10.

Another great listen from a truly talented individual. I don't want to put any undo pressure on you, bro, but it's peeps like you, and the great work you do, that keeps me here.

Just sayin...
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Posted 05 April 2012 - 09:45 AM

View PostRobAsh15, on 25 March 2012 - 10:47 AM, said:

Jason,

I won't be penning an in depth review of this. Not that it doesn't deserve it. It absolutely does. In the very best sense. But, I am going through some personal medical issues right now, and I have discovered they are affecting my attitude towards things... a thing you and others here do not deserve.

Anyways, I listened to this little gem the other day. Hearing a new tune from you once gain reminded me of the aspects of being a member here that I personally value the most. Namely; interacting with some very very talented, charming folks.

This song strikes me, beyond it's excellent musicianship, as a highly creative effort. I often feel the best songs/movies/books etc., are produced when the subject is something completely off the beaten path... something you'd expect the least, and are therefore moved by to the greatest degree. This song has that quality.

Waristan....who woulda thunk?

Execution: 8.5 of 10.
Musicianship: 9 of 10
Originality: 11 of 10.

Another great listen from a truly talented individual. I don't want to put any undo pressure on you, bro, but it's peeps like you, and the great work you do, that keeps me here.

Just sayin...


Rob,
Back at ya! I'm a fan of yours! I think you rock harder than anyone on this board and I always look forward to hearing one of your AWESOME tunes. I truly hope your medical issue gets resolved quickly and painlessly. My prayers are with you! Thanks so much for listening B)

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Posted 11 April 2012 - 06:56 PM

Jason,

I knew you were fab the very first time I ever laid ears on you...LOL!!

What a great lyric and the music of this is amazing...you are such a talent, you always knock me off my feet.

This is art, true art and you an amazing artist to me........fantastic and funny.......

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 05:54 PM

This is the second song of yours I've heard. Very creative, interesting, and fun to listen to. Good stuff! This might sound stupid, and it's a matter of taste, but your vocals sound to clean to me. For me I would like to hear a littly more rasp or harshness in your voice, Not much, but some. Again, thats just my taste, I haven't heard anyone else mention it. Looking foward to hearing more.

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Posted 15 April 2012 - 04:37 PM

Like I always say, for me personally, you've set the bar for what I expect from you quite high with your previous tunes. I'd have to say this one...if it was on your newest CD, I'd probably be disappointed by. It's a fun experimental tune in a genre I don't think I've heard from you, but it's not "Jason Kalman-ish" enough for me! :unsure:

The spoken bits feel kind of cheesy to me. The lyric isn't really doing anything for me either. I don't know where "Waristan" is supposed to be, if it's Afghanistan/Iraq...I don't understand why he had all these grand expectations. If it's a soldier...he expected to find true love? Beachfront? Maybe I'm just reading/hearing the lyric wrong.

Vocals are what I expect from you, in other words you're sounding great, especially the falsetto on "HELL!".

Drums need some polishing, dig the sound of them but they lose the groove in quite a few places.

I put it on a second time as I was writing up the review and it's growing on me a little bit but I don't think it'll make it very far up my list of favorite Kalman tunes. (I'm still expecting you to tell us "No Fairytale Life" was signed for an MTV show placement)
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Posted 15 April 2012 - 05:03 PM

Just came across this in the April contest. This one along with some of the others in the contest make me wonder what the heck I think I'm actually doing entering LOL! Thought it was outstanding. Great guitar work. My only quibble with what I heard is the mix in that the lead guitars could be up a little more. Not a big deal and maybe more of a preference thing. Someone might not like the style (I do) but you executed it perfectly. Sometimes I think we set a target for a certain style and not everyone is going to like that style, however we should all recognize if you've hit the sweet spot you were shooting for and I really do think you did on this one. Just give me geetars at 11! ;)

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Posted 16 April 2012 - 05:50 AM

View PostOnewholovesrock, on 13 April 2012 - 05:54 PM, said:

This is the second song of yours I've heard. Very creative, interesting, and fun to listen to. Good stuff! This might sound stupid, and it's a matter of taste, but your vocals sound to clean to me. For me I would like to hear a littly more rasp or harshness in your voice, Not much, but some. Again, thats just my taste, I haven't heard anyone else mention it. Looking foward to hearing more.


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Posted 16 April 2012 - 05:59 AM

View PostTamsNumber4, on 11 April 2012 - 06:56 PM, said:

Jason,

I knew you were fab the very first time I ever laid ears on you...LOL!!

What a great lyric and the music of this is amazing...you are such a talent, you always knock me off my feet.

This is art, true art and you an amazing artist to me........fantastic and funny.......

Tammy


Thanks Tammy!!!! I feel the same way about your tunes! You are such a great talent!
I really appreciate the listen :)
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Posted 16 April 2012 - 06:03 AM

View PostFunkDaddy, on 15 April 2012 - 04:37 PM, said:

Like I always say, for me personally, you've set the bar for what I expect from you quite high with your previous tunes. I'd have to say this one...if it was on your newest CD, I'd probably be disappointed by. It's a fun experimental tune in a genre I don't think I've heard from you, but it's not "Jason Kalman-ish" enough for me! :unsure:

The spoken bits feel kind of cheesy to me. The lyric isn't really doing anything for me either. I don't know where "Waristan" is supposed to be, if it's Afghanistan/Iraq...I don't understand why he had all these grand expectations. If it's a soldier...he expected to find true love? Beachfront? Maybe I'm just reading/hearing the lyric wrong.

Vocals are what I expect from you, in other words you're sounding great, especially the falsetto on "HELL!".

Drums need some polishing, dig the sound of them but they lose the groove in quite a few places.

I put it on a second time as I was writing up the review and it's growing on me a little bit but I don't think it'll make it very far up my list of favorite Kalman tunes. (I'm still expecting you to tell us "No Fairytale Life" was signed for an MTV show placement)

Thanks Mark for the listen and feedback. I know this is a huge departure from what I normally do and i really appreciate the compliments for the Liberation album :) I'll have to PM you on some of the motivations for writing a song like this. It would make a lot of sense (I think).
Great to hear from you! Thanks again for listening!
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Posted 16 April 2012 - 06:12 AM

View PostScotto, on 15 April 2012 - 05:03 PM, said:

Just came across this in the April contest. This one along with some of the others in the contest make me wonder what the heck I think I'm actually doing entering LOL! Thought it was outstanding. Great guitar work. My only quibble with what I heard is the mix in that the lead guitars could be up a little more. Not a big deal and maybe more of a preference thing. Someone might not like the style (I do) but you executed it perfectly. Sometimes I think we set a target for a certain style and not everyone is going to like that style, however we should all recognize if you've hit the sweet spot you were shooting for and I really do think you did on this one. Just give me geetars at 11! ;)


Scotto,
Thanks so much for listening and providing feedback. I'm glad you competed in the contest this month as we need the infusion of new blood :D My lead guitarist Lance would definitely agree with you that he is too low in the mix...hahahahaha.

Thanks again
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Posted 16 April 2012 - 08:04 AM

Superb vocals Jason!
That high note ...just awesome.
And you have a very sexy speaking voice too :)
I must admit it's not my style of music - you know my music, it's so laid back it's a wonder I've not slipped into a coma.
All the drums in this kind of jangle my brain BUT, I can hear it's an excellently produced track and the other day when I listened "Waristan" was echoing in my head for quite some time, as will happen again tonight no doubt.
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Posted 20 April 2012 - 02:02 AM

Jason,
Really digging this track. I know a couple young folks who know this feeling exactly from personal experience, and one guy who's still "on tour" - indeed, not as sexy a proposition as it sounds. I've sent them the link...
So you had me from the get go. So much lovely candy in the music/audio/and vocal delivery here. The guitars and drums play around each other like enemy gunfire, brilliant.
What can I tell you? I want to hear more....

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 09:11 PM

Hi Jason........listening to this again....and again...I really appreciate the "SKILL" and "CRAFTMANSHIP" you have incorporated in the production of this. Although it didn't "grab" everyone in the Muse's contest....it is bold, and in the right vein, it could go viral!! I believe it is that solid. I have no idea what genre this could take off in (Alternative...maybe, in a sub-culture of the Military)...but, it is VERY ORIGINAL.........now, that's doing something!! Good Job, Man! B) -Tom

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Posted 22 April 2012 - 06:20 AM

View PostWolf Kier, on 20 April 2012 - 02:02 AM, said:

Jason,
Really digging this track. I know a couple young folks who know this feeling exactly from personal experience, and one guy who's still "on tour" - indeed, not as sexy a proposition as it sounds. I've sent them the link...
So you had me from the get go. So much lovely candy in the music/audio/and vocal delivery here. The guitars and drums play around each other like enemy gunfire, brilliant.
What can I tell you? I want to hear more....

wolf.

BIG THANKS Wolf!!!! Appreciate the listen and for forwarding the link to our warrior heroes down range. Hope they enjoy!
Thanks Again!
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Posted 22 April 2012 - 06:24 AM

View PostIronknee, on 20 April 2012 - 09:11 PM, said:

Hi Jason........listening to this again....and again...I really appreciate the "SKILL" and "CRAFTMANSHIP" you have incorporated in the production of this. Although it didn't "grab" everyone in the Muse's contest....it is bold, and in the right vein, it could go viral!! I believe it is that solid. I have no idea what genre this could take off in (Alternative...maybe, in a sub-culture of the Military)...but, it is VERY ORIGINAL.........now, that's doing something!! Good Job, Man! B) -Tom

Tom,
Thanks so much for listening! Not sure what genre this song would go in. It reminds me of maybe some Van Halen and Rush....but not nearly as good :) Anyway I had a blast writing and recording this song. It was so much fun to just rock out!
Thanks again!
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