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Posted 11 March 2012 - 05:44 PM

"Never ending song challenge"

The seniors here should remember this one.

All that's needed to play, is you add the next line to the verse or chorus.

A repeat structure of verse, verse, verse, chorus, should be followed.

Whatever scheme of AA BB or AB AB CC etc. is established in the first verse and chorus, it will then be the template for the rest of the song.

As the song progresses you need only quote the last verse when you add your line, a full quote of the lyrics to the point of the last line entry can be posted from time to time.


"The Never Ending Song"

V1
Never saw it coming, had no chance
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Posted 11 March 2012 - 06:34 PM

It sounds like fun, Bruce; Really, it does. But, I can't play, because I can't write a new line until I fix the first one by inserting two "I" personal pronouns! Honest! LMAO! :)

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Posted 11 March 2012 - 06:57 PM

View PostDavid@HoboSage.com, on 11 March 2012 - 06:34 PM, said:

It sounds like fun, Bruce; Really, it does. But, I can't play, because I can't write a new line until I fix the first one by inserting two "I" personal pronouns! Honest! LMAO! Posted Image



If you wanna play....better strap your ass in nice and tight....the road gets really bumpy. Posted Image
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Posted 12 March 2012 - 08:57 AM

V1
Never saw it coming, had no chance
When she hauled her bootie to the bar
We have now sunk to a depth at which re-statement of the obvious is the first duty of intelligent men.
George Orwell

The greatest tragedy in mankind's entire history may be the hijacking of morality by religion.
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Posted 12 March 2012 - 09:49 AM

V1
Never saw it coming, had no chance
When she hauled her bootie to the bar
Never was out-running that avalanche
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Posted 12 March 2012 - 11:17 AM

V1
Never saw it coming, had no chance
When she hauled her bootie to the bar
Never was out-running that avalanche
of easy thoughts that make me hard

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Posted 12 March 2012 - 03:19 PM

V1
Never saw it coming, had no chance
When she hauled her bootie to the bar
Never was out-running that avalanche
of easy thoughts that make me hard
For a night of passion with a tub of lard

V2
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"In my opinion this is a bunch of filth and garbage and we need far less this type of lyrics gettin back in the ears of our children." - from a critique received

"When I was 5 years old, my mum always told me that happiness was the key to life. When I went to school, they asked me what I wante to be when I grew up. I wrote down, "Happy". The told me I didn't understand the assignment and I told them they didn't understand life." John Lennon.

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Posted 12 March 2012 - 03:22 PM

V1
Never saw it coming, had no chance
When she hauled her bootie to the bar
Never was out-running that avalanche
of easy thoughts that make me hard
For a night of passion with a tub of lard

V2
Never had a woman, big as her
We have now sunk to a depth at which re-statement of the obvious is the first duty of intelligent men.
George Orwell

The greatest tragedy in mankind's entire history may be the hijacking of morality by religion.
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Posted 12 March 2012 - 03:27 PM

V1
Never saw it coming, had no chance
When she hauled her bootie to the bar
Never was out-running that avalanche
of easy thoughts that make me hard
For a night of passion with a tub of lard

V2
Never had a woman, big as her
From somewhere a pussy did purr
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Posted 12 March 2012 - 04:08 PM

V1
Never saw it coming, had no chance
When she hauled her bootie to the bar
Never was out-running that avalanche
of easy thoughts that make me hard
For a night of passion with a tub of lard

V2
Never had a woman, big as her
From somewhere a pussy did purr


I thought we were going with ABABB? Oh well.
We have now sunk to a depth at which re-statement of the obvious is the first duty of intelligent men.
George Orwell

The greatest tragedy in mankind's entire history may be the hijacking of morality by religion.
Arthur C. Clarke

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Posted 12 March 2012 - 06:46 PM

V1
Never saw it coming, had no chance
When she hauled her bootie to the bar
Never was out-running that avalanche
of easy thoughts that make me hard
For a night of passion with a tub of lard

V2
Never had a woman, big as her
From somewhere a pussy did purr
I thought we were going with ABABB? Oh well.
I guess we'll just let this song go to hell





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Posted 13 March 2012 - 08:07 AM

Just when it was getting interesting :(

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 07:32 PM

V1
Never saw it coming, had no chance
When she hauled her bootie to the bar
Never was out-running that avalanche
of easy thoughts that make me hard
For a night of passion with a tub of lard

V2
Never had a woman, big as her
From somewhere a pussy did purr
I thought we were going with ABABB? Oh well
I guess we'll just let this song go to hell
A gone to hell song, well it just might sell
We have now sunk to a depth at which re-statement of the obvious is the first duty of intelligent men.
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The greatest tragedy in mankind's entire history may be the hijacking of morality by religion.
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Posted 13 March 2012 - 07:38 PM

V2
Never had a woman, big as her
From somewhere a pussy did purr
I thought we were going with ABABB? Oh well
I guess we'll just let this song go to hell
A gone to hell song, well it just might sell

Chorus:
Selling hell is easy when there's so much girl to love
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Posted 13 March 2012 - 07:48 PM

V2
Never had a woman, big as her
From somewhere a pussy did purr
I thought we were going with ABABB? Oh well
I guess we'll just let this song go to hell
A gone to hell song, well it just might sell

Chorus:
Selling hell is easy when there's so much girl to love
Big, big love, so much girl to love

V3
We have now sunk to a depth at which re-statement of the obvious is the first duty of intelligent men.
George Orwell

The greatest tragedy in mankind's entire history may be the hijacking of morality by religion.
Arthur C. Clarke

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 08:02 PM

V2
Never had a woman, big as her
From somewhere a pussy did purr
I thought we were going with ABABB? Oh well
I guess we'll just let this song go to hell
A gone to hell song, well it just might sell

Chorus:
Selling hell is easy when there's so much girl to love
Big, big love, so much girl to love
It's buying all the bull**** that's oh so hard to do




I'm thinking an AABAABB chorus?
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Posted 13 March 2012 - 09:30 PM

V2
Never had a woman, big as her
From somewhere a pussy did purr
I thought we were going with ABABB? Oh well
I guess we'll just let this song go to hell
A gone to hell song, well it just might sell

Chorus:
Selling hell is easy when there's so much girl to love
Big, big love, so much girl to love
It's buying all the bull**** that's oh so hard to do
But everybody knows it comes easy for you

V3
We have now sunk to a depth at which re-statement of the obvious is the first duty of intelligent men.
George Orwell

The greatest tragedy in mankind's entire history may be the hijacking of morality by religion.
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Posted 13 March 2012 - 09:31 PM

V3
Never was a challenge, quite so tough
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Posted 13 March 2012 - 09:34 PM

V3
Never was a challenge, quite so tough
But then, I've been a fighter all my life
We have now sunk to a depth at which re-statement of the obvious is the first duty of intelligent men.
George Orwell

The greatest tragedy in mankind's entire history may be the hijacking of morality by religion.
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Posted 24 March 2012 - 08:22 PM

V3
Never was a challenge, quite so tough
But then, I've been a fighter all my life
Who never had a girl, quite so rough

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Posted 04 April 2012 - 07:29 PM

V3
Never was a challenge, quite so tough
But then, I've been a fighter all my life
Who never had a girl, quite so rough
So I'm willin' to make the sacrifice

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Posted 21 March 2014 - 06:58 AM

[quote name='Duane Clancy' date='05 April 2012 - 02:29 AM' timestamp='1333585798' post='575215']
V3
Never was a challenge, quite so tough
But then, I've been a fighter all my life
Who never had a girl, quite so rough
So I'm willin' to make the sacrifice
Hope nobody sees me roll this dice

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