A quick little melody Rough guitar demo
Posted 11 February 2011 - 12:20 AM
I found it a bit hard to sing to, so to speak.
Too, I think you're own singering - no typo - could have used a little bit more ornamention for my taste, in the lead segments. I think for its coloring, which is familiar, then that might sort it from others with the same features.
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Posted 18 August 2011 - 11:44 PM
You use a 4 phrase structure, again, a long standing method.
The first phrase ends on a weak beat, the 2nd phrase ends on a strong beat.
Again, an age old method, and a good one. I think you should make the 4th phrase end on a strong beat also.
The chord part has no melody, of course. The chords are nice.
This needs more, obviously. More development to make it a complete melody.
A good beginning.
Posted 23 January 2013 - 12:52 AM
Thank you Phil