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Feel free to post your lyrics here so that others can tell you what they think. If you're critiquing, please make sure to keep your criticism constructive.
PLEASE NOTE: Messages will remain here for 30 days before they'll be pruned. Storing too many messages slows down the board display for everyone. Remember that this board is free for you all, but the space it takes up isn't free for me to provide. ;) Also note that there are both guidelines and RULES before. Please read both! I appreciate your understanding.
RULES FOR POSTING:
1) Please only post one song per day.
2) Please post a minimum of two reviews for each posting of your own lyrics
If you want reviews, you need to give reviews. The more you review, the more you will get back. This is not a "pat on the back" forum. It's a place for people to get constructive criticism about work they're genuinely interested in improving. You need a thick skin, and you need to PARTICIPATE by doing more than just posting your own song. Help out your fellow participants and you will, in fact, be helping yourself.
3) If your message becomes a personal attack on anyone, expect it to be erased. This is a LYRIC critique board - not a PERSON critique board. ;) Keep your messages and your replies on topic.
4) And it disappoints me that I even have to mention this ... but PLEASE keep your lyrics tasteful. What do I mean by that? Overt sexuality, extreme amounts of swearing ... Ok. I don't mind self-expression. But when it's just gross for the reason of being gross and serves no purpose whatsoever than to offend, it's not welcome here. End of story. Use metaphors. Be creative and not overt. There are kids that read this stuff, ok? Thanks.
If we stick to these simple guidelines, we'll all be a bit happier - and more able to keep up with the volume of songs posted.
GUIDELINES FOR POSTING
1) Indicate what genre your song is for. This will give people a better idea of the goals you might have with your song and will avoid confusion.
2) Let people know if you're after an in-depth critique. If you're not, don't say anything. But if you really want people to go to town on your lyric - if you're after constructive criticism that will really help you with improving it, please do say so. You can add that into your thread's "description" field when you first post.
3) PLEASE participate in other areas of the board. I realize that for some of you, this forum is extremely important - and I think that's great! But there are other forums too. Spread your wisdom around, hmm? ;) Become a participating member of this community.
Thanks folks! --Jodi
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10 | eddy | 1493 | 16th November 2009 - 11:50 AM Last post by: Neal K |
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Pinned: Silver Critique - Discussion
Lets give it a whirl
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41 | NigeQ | 4165 | 18th September 2009 - 05:58 PM Last post by: bernabby |
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Pinned: "Reply" and "Add Reply"
Please read before posting
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10 | Neal K | 1078 | 10th July 2009 - 05:00 PM Last post by: Neal K |
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204 | Len | 11313 | 6th May 2009 - 11:33 AM Last post by: MysteryMike |
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71 | Neal K | 43726 | 16th April 2009 - 03:15 PM Last post by: Salley Gardens |
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2 | John Paragreen | 29 | Yesterday, 10:18 PM Last post by: Alistair S |
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untitled for now...
These lyrics are not about one event, but rather "change" in g
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2 | TurnTheRecordOver | 41 | Yesterday, 06:37 PM Last post by: TurnTheRecordOver |
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19 | John Paragreen | 352 | Yesterday, 04:48 PM Last post by: John Paragreen |
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Hard As Diamonds (male vocals/soft-rock?)
Please critique
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4 | DonnaMarilyn | 78 | Yesterday, 02:45 PM Last post by: 14music |
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lady chasing blues
the kind i find myself with often
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3 | ivh5023 | 151 | Yesterday, 09:15 AM Last post by: Alistair S |
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The Eight Bar Blues (another update)
Third Rewrite
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11 | BrianJ | 193 | Yesterday, 08:45 AM Last post by: BrianJ |
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Grandpa And His Delta Blues
A major rewrite of "The Electrician"
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13 | Billy | 396 | Yesterday, 08:07 AM Last post by: Billy |
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If You Can't Call Me by My Name
~Rewrite on Post #7
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9 | Melissassippi | 127 | 20th November 2009 - 10:42 PM Last post by: OskaSeason |
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More Than a Word
from Nov lyric contest's theme of peace
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8 | dhess | 102 | 20th November 2009 - 08:21 PM Last post by: TurnTheRecordOver |
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You've Known Lonesome-Some Changes on Nov 19
Country style yet to be inspirational somewhat...
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10 | kimberlyinnc | 143 | 20th November 2009 - 03:27 PM Last post by: stewart alexander |
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Until
Lyric about Peace
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11 | kimberlyinnc | 186 | 20th November 2009 - 03:18 PM Last post by: stewart alexander |
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1 | akhtar | 53 | 20th November 2009 - 11:08 AM Last post by: Len |
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Man For You
Song Lyric
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5 | The Conductor | 81 | 19th November 2009 - 02:09 PM Last post by: DonnaMarilyn |
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End of Her Story
pop-rockish? folk-rock?
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10 | DonnaMarilyn | 149 | 18th November 2009 - 10:59 AM Last post by: Melissassippi |
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Janes Poison
interested in your opinions
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5 | martb | 108 | 18th November 2009 - 08:46 AM Last post by: martb |
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2 | royce | 78 | 17th November 2009 - 11:16 PM Last post by: royce |
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Beautiful Dreams
please critique
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5 | BrianJ | 85 | 17th November 2009 - 04:30 PM Last post by: BrianJ |
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Civilized Men
A latecomet
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7 | jonie | 157 | 16th November 2009 - 07:50 PM Last post by: jonie |
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Make It Hurt.
Critique freely
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1 | whatsoname | 111 | 16th November 2009 - 07:35 PM Last post by: Len |
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Her Quintessential Life
for critique
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6 | jonie | 131 | 16th November 2009 - 07:24 PM Last post by: Alistair S |
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You've got the Hand
One more that I wrote recently - Americana
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6 | pmlong | 165 | 16th November 2009 - 07:10 PM Last post by: Len |
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Sweet Little Rover
Lullaby (blues-folk?)
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4 | DonnaMarilyn | 106 | 15th November 2009 - 05:00 PM Last post by: DonnaMarilyn |
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I'm Writing it Down
A love song
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18 | jonie | 324 | 14th November 2009 - 09:07 PM Last post by: Theresa |
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Defying Gravity
Lyric for a tween singer...
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14 | kimberlyinnc | 261 | 14th November 2009 - 11:18 AM Last post by: kimberlyinnc |
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Welcome To Baghdad
Revised lyric (previously posted in song critiques)
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9 | Billy | 215 | 14th November 2009 - 11:15 AM Last post by: DonnaMarilyn |
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untitled
accoustic love song
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2 | apfmh | 93 | 14th November 2009 - 10:23 AM Last post by: jonie |
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Out of the Window She Fell in Love (REVISION 1)
Female vocals (probably pop-rock)
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5 | DonnaMarilyn | 134 | 14th November 2009 - 09:42 AM Last post by: DonnaMarilyn |
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I Saw Red
Revised version of a lyric I wrote last year
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20 | Billy | 342 | 14th November 2009 - 09:34 AM Last post by: jonie |
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21 | stewart alexander | 307 | 13th November 2009 - 08:35 PM Last post by: Alistair S |
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Caroline
Third Draft
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16 | Alistair S | 263 | 13th November 2009 - 07:25 PM Last post by: DonnaMarilyn |
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Impossible Dreams
crit and comments welcome
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8 | BrianJ | 137 | 13th November 2009 - 02:05 PM Last post by: BrianJ |
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18 | John Paragreen | 348 | 12th November 2009 - 03:35 PM Last post by: John Paragreen |
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A Mutual Desire *EDITED*
Acoustic "rock"
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11 | Jowity | 223 | 11th November 2009 - 08:11 PM Last post by: Jowity |
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Small town joy
copyright 2009 Andrew Jones
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3 | TurnTheRecordOver | 88 | 11th November 2009 - 08:04 PM Last post by: TurnTheRecordOver |
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17 | John Paragreen | 259 | 11th November 2009 - 12:03 PM Last post by: John Paragreen |
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A Heart Like Yours
Would like to tweak a few lines
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9 | James J | 188 | 11th November 2009 - 09:01 AM Last post by: Billy |
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The Electrician
Hot of the presses
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15 | Billy | 292 | 11th November 2009 - 08:48 AM Last post by: Billy |
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Johnny Dakota
Where have our heroes gone?
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4 | JGB | 153 | 10th November 2009 - 07:20 PM Last post by: jonie |
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You Won
(re-write-formerly known as "Jerk")
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12 | Justice Marie | 235 | 10th November 2009 - 04:58 PM Last post by: Justice Marie |
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Falling Apart
Song For Critique
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2 | The Conductor | 114 | 10th November 2009 - 04:29 PM Last post by: BrianJ |
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10 | NewbieSongwriter | 193 | 10th November 2009 - 04:19 PM Last post by: BrianJ |
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King Of Hearts
Critiques welcome!
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12 | HotKnives | 200 | 9th November 2009 - 10:55 PM Last post by: The Conductor |
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Oh So Many Times
check it out por favor
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2 | Dkbronco | 85 | 9th November 2009 - 04:05 PM Last post by: Dkbronco |
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Better Every Time
w/o devotion line :(
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12 | dhess | 231 | 9th November 2009 - 09:38 AM Last post by: dhess |
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TRAGEDY KNOWS OUTCAST JOES
Rewrite
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2 | Lagusaya2 | 94 | 8th November 2009 - 04:50 PM Last post by: Lagusaya2 |
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