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> Lyric Critique Forum Rules

Feel free to post your lyrics here so that others can tell you what they think. If you're critiquing, please make sure to keep your criticism constructive.

PLEASE NOTE: Messages will remain here for 30 days before they'll be pruned. Storing too many messages slows down the board display for everyone. Remember that this board is free for you all, but the space it takes up isn't free for me to provide. ;) Also note that there are both guidelines and RULES before. Please read both! I appreciate your understanding.

RULES FOR POSTING:

1) Please only post one song per day.
2) Please post a minimum of two reviews for each posting of your own lyrics
If you want reviews, you need to give reviews. The more you review, the more you will get back. This is not a "pat on the back" forum. It's a place for people to get constructive criticism about work they're genuinely interested in improving. You need a thick skin, and you need to PARTICIPATE by doing more than just posting your own song. Help out your fellow participants and you will, in fact, be helping yourself.
3) If your message becomes a personal attack on anyone, expect it to be erased. This is a LYRIC critique board - not a PERSON critique board. ;) Keep your messages and your replies on topic.
4) And it disappoints me that I even have to mention this ... but PLEASE keep your lyrics tasteful. What do I mean by that? Overt sexuality, extreme amounts of swearing ... Ok. I don't mind self-expression. But when it's just gross for the reason of being gross and serves no purpose whatsoever than to offend, it's not welcome here. End of story. Use metaphors. Be creative and not overt. There are kids that read this stuff, ok? Thanks.

If we stick to these simple guidelines, we'll all be a bit happier - and more able to keep up with the volume of songs posted.

GUIDELINES FOR POSTING

1) Indicate what genre your song is for. This will give people a better idea of the goals you might have with your song and will avoid confusion.
2) Let people know if you're after an in-depth critique. If you're not, don't say anything. But if you really want people to go to town on your lyric - if you're after constructive criticism that will really help you with improving it, please do say so. You can add that into your thread's "description" field when you first post.
3) PLEASE participate in other areas of the board. I realize that for some of you, this forum is extremely important - and I think that's great! But there are other forums too. Spread your wisdom around, hmm? ;) Become a participating member of this community.


Thanks folks! --Jodi

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11 kimberlyinnc 189 20th November 2009 - 03:18 PM
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10 DonnaMarilyn 153 18th November 2009 - 10:59 AM
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5 martb 110 18th November 2009 - 08:46 AM
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14 kimberlyinnc 263 14th November 2009 - 11:18 AM
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9 Billy 221 14th November 2009 - 11:15 AM
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5 DonnaMarilyn 138 14th November 2009 - 09:42 AM
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20 Billy 345 14th November 2009 - 09:34 AM
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21 stewart alexander 311 13th November 2009 - 08:35 PM
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16 Alistair S 267 13th November 2009 - 07:25 PM
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copyright 2009 Andrew Jones
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17 John Paragreen 259 11th November 2009 - 12:03 PM
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