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I've Been Waiting For You Country with a Latin flavor

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Posted 12 December 2011 - 02:33 AM

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Posted 18 December 2011 - 04:27 AM

yeah I could certainly hear that Latin/country feel to it, give me a Margarita, and might even imagine seeing Jimmy Buffet sitting next to me. Posted Image

About the only crit I might have, is you could maybe chop about a 60 seconds of the playing time, I was starting to lose interest near the end.

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Posted 18 December 2011 - 12:03 PM

Kenneth, You run through the chorus two times too many for me and the instrumental at the end is a little long. The one other thing I think would help it out a bit is pick up the tempo a few BPM, it just feels too slow for me.

The melody is good and in my head I can hear all kinds of possibilities with this song.

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Posted 18 December 2011 - 11:12 PM

I have shortened it and sped it up. Thank you
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